Gogofan
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Sup. I'm a brony from Puerto Rico who likes to make new friend. I'm bilingual.
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Post by Gogofan on Dec 22, 2015 3:01:17 GMT
((No name suggestions? Anon it is))
Anon fell back on his butt hurting his ankle but he was too surprise by the creature in front of him to notice.
He started crawling back wards a bit "w-w-w-w-w-what are you?!!”
He looked at the flying stick in the air and got even more scared. As he put his leg on the grown to push himself back the massive pain reminded him that he was hurt and couldn't get away even if he wanted to.
Knowing he had nowhere to go he turned sideways, put his knees in his chest and curled up in a ball try to brace himself for the worst.
"Please don't hurt me~" he said with a shaky voice
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Cloud, High Overlord of all
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Post by Cloud, High Overlord of all on Dec 22, 2015 3:59:40 GMT
The mare snorted and laughed. Then in her Irish accent she said "you're hilarious what ever ya' are. I'm not going ta hurt you so long as you don't do so to myself. Now what exactly are you?" She asked putting the stick asside and stepping out further.
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Cloud, High Overlord of all
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Post by Cloud, High Overlord of all on Dec 22, 2015 4:07:27 GMT
((No, no I want to have her call him Pyro but his name could be Andrew I Kinda like that))
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Gogofan
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Sup. I'm a brony from Puerto Rico who likes to make new friend. I'm bilingual.
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Post by Gogofan on Dec 22, 2015 4:15:23 GMT
Anon only tensed up as the wierd creature started getting closer. He was completely terrified, he had just barely survived a murber attempt and not there was a talking creature in front of him and he was completely at it's mercy.
His mind was too filled with fright to register anything but the immense pain and the approaching steps of what he thought could be his doom.
He started breathing heavily and rapidly. Soon the pain mixed with his confusion, terror and hyperventilating was too much and he passed out.
((Introductions later, his really been through a lot. I have one heck of a back story for him and it's scary stuff. Thats why his so scared))
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Cloud, High Overlord of all
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Post by Cloud, High Overlord of all on Dec 22, 2015 4:22:47 GMT
"Oy, you've been through a lot of something haven't you? Look I'm not going to hurt you, but it'll do you no good cowering on the ground. Ah here's the problem." She pointed out his injury. "Now hold still lad." She spoke calm and used her magic to heal the rest without getting closer and scaring him more.
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Gogofan
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Sup. I'm a brony from Puerto Rico who likes to make new friend. I'm bilingual.
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Post by Gogofan on Dec 22, 2015 4:28:43 GMT
((He is passed out, unconscious, fainted. He won't wake up for a while so use this time to set your characters personality, life setting and such. Maybe a change in scenario would be good.))
Anon didn't respond, he was completely KO'd. He just layed there limply, with his wet clothes and shivering at the cold night air.
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Post by Cloud, High Overlord of all on Dec 22, 2015 4:41:15 GMT
Oh well that's just great. I can't believe something bigger than I completely..." Her voice trailed off when she realized that it had been attacked and traumatized in some way. "You stupid fool Morgan, you're supposed to be a healer and know these things." She told herself as she healed the rest of the wounds. "Confounded, never mind. I don't exactly know what to do with it now. Can't take it back home ,it'll be more frightened andi can't just leave it here to die." She thought for a while and then an Idea struck her. "I'll take it back to my hidden cottage in that little cove. I bet it'll like that." She said. Getting closer to the unconscious body.Mirgan picked him up in her magic.He was heavy but surely not as heavy as her two brothers at home. " Alright ya big mule time to get you out of here." She took him to her hidden cove and sethim up a bed in her home.
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Gogofan
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Sup. I'm a brony from Puerto Rico who likes to make new friend. I'm bilingual.
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Post by Gogofan on Dec 22, 2015 5:02:28 GMT
((Good, nice entry. I really liked how she got that sudden realization moment. Describe your cottage and if there are more ponies inside and i can start my part. Just to let you know I'll make him wake up in the morning))
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Gogofan
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Post by Gogofan on Dec 22, 2015 5:05:00 GMT
((And don't worry about taking you time the more detailed the more personal it gets and the better the story is.))
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Post by Cloud, High Overlord of all on Dec 22, 2015 22:41:37 GMT
(( thanks for the encouragement and tips )) The cottage in the cove was far form Morgans home where her siblings and friends came to. the cove was a beautiful and safe place that none but Morgan and her brothers and sister knew of it's existence. It was surrounded by tall soft grey cliffs, A Thick dense forest, and at the front a Beach and a big blue ocean. Coming off the cliffs was a fresh water waterfall that flowed into a small pool at the bottom before streaming into the sea. The forest was dank and filled with loads of life and vegetation as well as magic and mystery. Behind the beach's line of sand that reached for the grass stood the little cottage, flowering vines growing up it's red walls. on the inside of the little three roomed house was a small living space with a tiny fire stove on the kitchen and shelves of herbs and medicines in the back. the floors were polished planks with warm Red carpets scattered across the floor. Chairs filled the room in the back where the bookshelves of remedies and hand crafted weapons lined along the walls didn't. there was a small table in the center of the room and there was a large open door way to the front room that housed the small kitchen and a tall table. when you walk through the back room and up the stairs where no shelves lined the walls there is a second floor that had four neat beds in all four corners. A firepit sat on the far wall and a hook hung in the middle of the ceiling for a lantern to be hooked on. At the moment, both were lit. and one of the beds was being occupied by the strange creature that Morgan had healed and taken in. He lied not moving and softly breathing. "Alright I'll give it till morning" she told herself walking over to her own bed at the other side of the room. "But then I'm guna' need some answers." she sat awake on her bed the rest of the night, the gears in her head grinding as she tried to figure out how to handle this situation. when morning came she slipped down stairs to the kitchen to make herself some tea. ending up making a small batch of breakfast rolls while she was at it. ((how's that for deatial? LOL ))
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Gogofan
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Sup. I'm a brony from Puerto Rico who likes to make new friend. I'm bilingual.
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Post by Gogofan on Dec 22, 2015 23:09:15 GMT
((Lol your not a fan of spacing between paragraphs huh. Nah but seriously very good))
Light from the window started pouring over Anon's eyes, the discomforts slowly waking him up. He opened his eyes and used his hands to block out the sun's rays from stinging his eyes.
As his mind started to clear for his sleep grogginess he noticed that he wasn't at his home. He looked down and saw that he was in a room with four beds and he was in one of them.
The bed was fairly small, his legs dangled off the edge of it since the bed could only accommodate his uper boddy and his butt. He set up and notice that the sealing was also lower than normal.
He started recollecting his thoughts trying to remember how he got there. He only remember bits and pieces, he remembered almost drowning and pain, a lot of pain.
He looked at his hand where he remember he had cut himself but there was nothing there, then he wiggled his right ankle which was supposed to be twisted but he felt no pain.
"Odd... Good but odd" he mumbled to himself
His clothes were still damp but thanks to the small fireplace in the room he wasn't cold. Still it felt uncomfortable so he took it off. He looked at his floppy belly and frawnd, he's been trying to loose weight but he just couldn't seem to get rid of the las 20 pounds.
He felt like he was forgetting something but he just couldn't put his finger on it. His train of thought was cut as he heard two pair of footsteps coming towards his room and he also smelled something delicious.
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Cloud, High Overlord of all
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Post by Cloud, High Overlord of all on Dec 22, 2015 23:49:48 GMT
The stepping stopped before he could see it's full source. Two Dark green hears poked up from the stairs. The Mare softly whispered something inaudible, then turned and walked back down the stairs. She felt that it was awake but she also felt that there was no need to go up yet. this odd feeling was a gift she was granted when she was younger. she had saved a little filly, the daughter of a great unicorn sage of her first home very far away. She went back downstairs and began making a solution called the perception filter potion. It was something she had wished to do for a long time and she finally had all the ingredients to do it. (The last one being something she had collected before she ran into the creature.) she heard moving upstairs but she kept making her little potion and ignored it by humming a song from home.
((a magic liquid perception filter sound useful in the future?))
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Post by felicitythefeirce on Dec 23, 2015 0:01:33 GMT
((OK, looks like you are carrying on just fine without me so I'll butt in later))
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Gogofan
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Sup. I'm a brony from Puerto Rico who likes to make new friend. I'm bilingual.
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Post by Gogofan on Dec 23, 2015 0:18:03 GMT
Anon was looking at the stairs when two green ears poked out before turning back. At that moment realization dawn over him. He remembered every, the strange creature he had encountered and how it had talked in the voice of a young woman.
His mind was raising, first he was scared and wanted to jump out a window but then he thought of something. He realized that the creature hadn't hurt him and what's more he was now in a bed next to a warm fire and he wasn't hurt anymore.
He took a few seconds to analyze the situation and got to the conclusion that if the creature was dangerous it would have killed him by now. He stayed in the bed pondering for a few minutes, then he mustered up his courage and got out of bet to face the mysterious creatures.
Anon stood up from the bed and slowly walked towards the stairs. He was still a bit uneasy but he pushed himself to go down the staircase. He walked as quietly as he could being very careful not to make a sound.
Through the bars of the stair rails he spotted the creature besides a table on the room below. Not knowing what to do he just stayed there and watched as the creature appeared to be making something as she... hummed? Yes she was humming, so it appears that he wasn't completely insane and hadn't imagine what happened last night.
He set on the stairs and just stared at the creature not making a sound, studying her.
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Cloud, High Overlord of all
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Post by Cloud, High Overlord of all on Dec 23, 2015 1:09:09 GMT
"Ah ha!" She called mixing the potion. "It's done. And I will now check that one off the list." Morgan poured the liquid into a pint size bottle and put the labeled bottle on the shelf with her magic. She had felt him watching all this time. When her back was turned and she was scratching out some things into a book with a quill she said speaking in her accent. "I prefer you put the clothes back on lad then you can come down. I don't bite." Then she muttered "usually" closing the book and putting it under the counter and cleaning up her potion mess and any other mess in the kitchen.
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