Gogofan
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Post by Gogofan on Jan 7, 2016 4:09:04 GMT
Hey Cloud, why don't you write a short story summary aboit Belle using rule # four of the pixar rules?
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Gogofan
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Post by Gogofan on Jan 7, 2016 4:09:52 GMT
Fill in the blanks.
#4: Once upon a time there was ___. Every day, ___. One day ___. Because of that, ___. Because of that, ___. Until finally ___
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Post by Cloud, High Overlord of all on Jan 7, 2016 5:45:28 GMT
UH, ok
Once upon a time there was a blue and green unicorn mare named Belle who worked with her friend TK in his shop. Every day she would go to the Bell tower and watch everything from above then go home and read her books, test theories and experiments, and chart stars until it was time for a new day. One Day, Tk came over to help her with an unfinished experiment. Because of that, She accidentally rushed things and He went deaf. Belle was furious with herself but the day caried on and her feelings began to change. Because of that, an "old friend showed up and turned her world upside-down making it so that he would never heal until she confessed what she felt. she kept it a secret for fear that things were going to fast and there was a slim chance that he wouldn't see it in the way she meant.for then she would not only loose a love (dare I say) but also a great friend. (I'm gunna stop there cuase we've now caught up with the story)
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Post by Gogofan on Jan 7, 2016 14:55:47 GMT
Well done but there are more than 6 sentences there
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Post by Cloud, High Overlord of all on Jan 7, 2016 15:20:13 GMT
yup, there are
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Post by Gogofan on Jan 7, 2016 15:31:51 GMT
Yoi can compress any story, doesn't matter which into those 6 sentences. Try it out, I really do mean any story
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Post by Cloud, High Overlord of all on Jan 7, 2016 15:51:43 GMT
How about you do one first (please?)
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Post by Gogofan on Jan 7, 2016 17:05:32 GMT
1. Once upon a time there was a robot named wall e. 2. Every day, he would compact trash in the world and make enormous skyscrapersout of them. 3. One day another robot named Eve came to the planet and he fell in love with her. 4. Because of that, when the ship came to pick her up he went with her and found the humans in a space cruise. 5. Because of that, he had to fight and defeat an evil computer who was keeping the humans away from earth. 6. Until finally he brought the humans back to earth, they repopulate the planet and he lived happily ever after with eve.
Wall-e story in 6 sentences
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Post by Cloud, High Overlord of all on Jan 7, 2016 18:42:50 GMT
*claps* very nice I will work on compacting my ssentances then mr. teacher, umm I mean gogo XD XP sorry That is very helpful though
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Post by Cloud, High Overlord of all on Jan 7, 2016 18:43:55 GMT
oh! oh! I have a story I'm righting that I can probably do with that (it's where I got Belle' s first name)
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Post by Gogofan on Jan 7, 2016 18:47:29 GMT
Cool
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Post by Cloud, High Overlord of all on Jan 7, 2016 19:12:04 GMT
sorry I'm getting to exited
(should I?)
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Post by Gogofan on Jan 7, 2016 19:19:06 GMT
Go right ahead
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Post by Cloud, High Overlord of all on Jan 7, 2016 19:50:58 GMT
1. Once upon a time, there was a Girl named Belle Adams. 2. Every day she would lead a normal life as a 10th grade only child, her mom at work half the time and her dad over sea's. 3. one day, she came across a jewel that was believed to hold the power to take certain people to the past. 4. Because of that, she ended up going to a group of islands in 1776 and following the history of the assassins, everytime she put on the necklace. 5. Because of that, she made an enemy of the local Templar assistants and a friend of a band of pirates and she would soon find has a secret among it's ranks. 6. Until finally, Belle found a way to spill the secret of the evil among them and defeat the conflict of the ranks as well as rid the Islands of the Templars for centuries.
The Jeweled Assassin in 6 (sloppy) sentances
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Post by Gogofan on Jan 7, 2016 19:54:41 GMT
Lol well done
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